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The sunset was pretty.
I could smell the cows.
My room was clean.
The sunset was pretty.
I could smell the cows.
My room was clean.
(Change the sentences so they are more interesting to read. Do not change the meaning)
The sunset was pretty
ReplyDeleteI could smell the flowers
It was beautiful
The sun set was the beautiful one yet The flowers smell grate.
ReplyDeleteEva
1. The colorful sunset was very pretty.
ReplyDelete2. I could smell the brown and black cows gas.
3. My room was so clean it was gleeming in the sunlight.
I sang good in chapel! I liked the sunset I could feel the wind and I could feel the breeze in my hair.
ReplyDeleteMegan O.
1. The sunset was very pretty
ReplyDelete2. I could smell the bad cows
3. My class was cleaner then ever.
Michael D.
1. The sunset is so beautiful.
ReplyDelete2. I could smell the beautiful flowers.
3. I can smell the all of the cows gas from my window.
Carly
seiously, theres some changing that needs to be goin on !
ReplyDelete1:the sunset was very pretty!
2:i could smell the cows bad smell!
3:my room was very tidy!
1.The sunset had beautiful colors on it.
ReplyDelete2.I could smell the cow's stinky odor.
3.My pretty room was nice and clean.
1.The sunset had so many pretty colors.
ReplyDelete2.I opened my window and could smell the cows gas.
3.My room sparkled in the sunlight.
The sunset was pretty I could smell the Flowers.
ReplyDeleteThe sunset was pretty with orange and purple colors. I could smell the yucky smelling cows. Every inch of my room was clean.
ReplyDelete1.The sunset was the most beautiful I'v ever seen.
ReplyDelete2.I could smell the terrible smell of cows.
3.My room was spotless,Every thing was put away.
1. the sunset was yellow and purple
ReplyDelete2. the cow did not smell so good.
3. my room was spotless.
sam k.
I can smell cows they smell disgusting.I didn't see the sunset.
ReplyDelete1. The pink and yellow sunset was pretty.
ReplyDelete2. I could smell the stinky cows.
3. My room was super clean because I cleaned it.
The sunset was beauitful.I snift a flower and it smelld like perfume. I could smell the cows from far away.My room was so clean it was glitering.
ReplyDeleteI for got to write my name the one befor that is my Emma#2
ReplyDeleteThe sunset was a beautiful sight.
ReplyDeleteI could smell the stinky cows.
My room looked so neat and clean.
JACOB MAJOR
The sunset showed beautiful, fiery colors across the sky.
ReplyDeleteThe terrible odor that came from the cows made me gag.
My friends came over and thrash my sparkling clean room.
Grant Y.
The sunset showed beautiful, fiery colors across the sky.
ReplyDeleteThe terrible odor that came from the cows made me gag.
My friends came over and thrash my sparkling clean room.
Grant Y.
The sunset was so beautiful. I sol the flowers they smelled great so pretty .
ReplyDeleteThe sunset was so pretty.
ReplyDeleteI could smell The stinky cows.
My room was so tidy and clean.